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~Dad~

I have but one hole in my heart
and you left me here,
sad, hurt and lonely
I feel as if you abandoned me,
I miss you dad, I really do.
You left me dad
and I need you here with me
I need your love I need your care I need you.
You left me here with all this pain
I just need you to know
that I need you and I miss you and I love you










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  • Gabby Sabby
    January 6
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    thank you for your nice comments

  • Gabby Sabby
    July 27, 2008
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    thanks

  • Dove
    July 27, 2008

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    Hi beena
    I like how you can express how you feel, I think in time you will come to understand a bit better the ways of adults. Love the poem, it shows your tenderness.


  • Gabby Sabby
    July 27, 2008
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    thank you

  • Godsemogurl
    July 27, 2008
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    Hey, this is a great poem. you really show your tru emotions.

    Have a gr8 day and keep writing

  • Broken - gurl
    July 27, 2008
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    nice poem ..x
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