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Today is meant to be your day
a celebration of your birth,
balloons and banners all the way
a song of mirth.

A box that’s square and plain and brown
the contents are as yet unknown,
to raise a smile, perhaps a frown
I’ll set the tone.

At fifty you have reached the age
surprises can be big or small,
a man who’s learnt to turn the page
and heed the call.

In your brown box I thought I’d place
some seaside rock for you to suck,
I know just what will light your face,
a rubber duck.

This empty box may have no use
but filled with words and love from me,
now have some fun there’s no excuse
and have some tea!

 

 

 


 

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  • cricketjeff gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    Wonderful stuff rules prevent me giving more than an HM to your entries but this is a stormer
    Thanks for everything.