How can you
feel something
so strong for
someone who you
can't touch ,feel,
or see?
You talk to this
person constantly
everyday,
you tell them your
secrets And fears.
You grow so
emotionally attached
to someone you don't
even know but in yet
you know them how is that
possible?
You care for them with all
you have you don't wont
them to get hurt or see
anything bad happen to them.
But in yet you can feel it
in the pit of your
stomach you
want to be with
them so badly
you can't stand it, And if
one of the other
sex talks to them
you get jealous
as can be.
How is that possible when
you are not together.
When you have never
even meet
never even touched,
kissed, embraced
or made love?
All these emotions
run through
my mind and body and
it kills me
to know i can't be
with the one i want,
You're so far away.
Why does it have to
be that way?
Did God punish me in
some sort of way?
Or did i deserve
this for something i have
done? Why do i feel
Hurt and punished?
Please help me i just
want to be with you.
By your side my arms
wrapped around you tight.
Please God answer
my prayer
let me be with
the one i love
And let him love
me back the way
I love him.
That's all i ask.
Author notes
The tears were flowing when i wrote this .
I just want to know if anyone ever had this kind of problem?
My heart is aching terribly right now.
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Please be nice.This was very heartfelt. Came straight from the heart.
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THIS IS VERY STRONG, but it's a close tie. I still like the other one I read a lot...
Thought I very much so enjoyed this and found it to be strongly filled with LOVE and Emotions. ^_^
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WROUGHT FROM THE HEART AND SOUL AS ALL REAL POETRY IS!
Please God answer
my prayer
let me be with
the one i love
And let him love
me back the way
I love him.
That's all i ask.
A beautiful, heartfelt, soulful, and deeply emotion prayer - that I believe many people ask with the way people meet from all over the world today on their computers, etc. It seems like you may have found your soul mate - and perhaps he has found you, as well. Who knows what tomorrow may bring and what may be in the cards for the both of you? Whatever it may be I have a prayer of my own for your true happiness - and hope that you find all of the love you deserve - and as soon as I can sing ALL WE NEED IS LOVE!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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i feel this way toward someone too , its just pain and pleasure and i hope one day to resolve the distance. hope you resolve yours too you so deserve love.
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I totally forgot about this poem.
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It does seem pretty magical, to me how so many people feel this way, yet they really do.
Thanks for sharing and good luck.
Justgot2loveme
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Even though we seem to hide behind 'masks' and play cherades with life,(hiding who we really are,what we want and desire, eventually the masks fall off.
When words match with actions and actions match with the heart, then and only then is sincerity truely felt within the heart and leaps into your soul: This is the spiritual connection between two people.
Prayers are answered, just sometimes....we dont always get what we want. Think of God as a father with a child....the child asks, father says no because its not good for them or could harm them.....When God seems not to answer..you have your answer already...no; when a silent desire of the heart is answered...its a miricle.
psssst......... pray for those whom have hurt you, and you shall recieve blessings poured down from heaven.
Just a little wisdom for you....
"What's in the heart comes out of the mouth - both good and evil - words have the power of life or death, to lift up or tear down".
See clearly the heart through the mouth and you will gain wisdom to discern the difference. It takes 5mins to know what sort of character a person has...always look into the eyes to the soul, do you see light or darkness.....do they match the words?, your heart can always hear the truth if you allow it?....listen to it
Is this the answer to your prayers ... do you see?
The answer always comes ....Just not in our time:
Last time I spoke with God He didnt tell me he had a microwave oven and was on a human time table lol....oh yes, He does have a great sense of humour also.
Let go...Let God
Be blessed X
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There is a Jewish saying that "Words that come from the heart, enter the heart" (doesn't sound as good in English as in Hebrew) but this is a heartfelt piece that really jumps off the screen and into the heart of the reader.
I hope you find a way to be with that special one and spend the rest of time with them.
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Wow your words are very kind and very appreciative .
Thanks alot for your support .
My heart melted when i read your comment.
I can't say thank you enough.
-Mandi
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I know this one intimately. the feeling that is.
sometimes it just cant be helped, aye?
a few typos here and there.
and your line breaks are kind of choppy and awkward but to each his own if it was on purpose...
shine on
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wow!!
i love that!
omg!!!!
that is soo awesome!!!
mandi just wow!!
omg mandi u really need to look into getin ur poems published! when u do i will push past everyone who wants ur book so i can be the first n have u sign it!!
sorry that sounds mean but o well
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That doesn't sound mean at all,
Actually i'm flattered.
That makes me feel good.
I haven't been feeling really at that great and your words
just now made my night.
Thank you so much.
-Mandi
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I Love It
I know what it is like to want someone so badly you ache throughout your whole being and it just can't be. He lives one town away from me and is married with a little girl to my so called ex-bestfriend. Life is funny that way. I truly love this write. It is down to earth and filled with deep heartwrenching emotions. great write mandi...mandie
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Thank you so much.
Yes is it heart aching
just i gotta come to realize
maybe one day it will be and then again
it wont,who knows only god knows the answers and hes the only one who can fix it.
so all i can do is sit back and wait.
-Mandi
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How I immediately related to this opening line even though I felt at first your subject is not the same as mine, but as I read on, I was drawn even more to the similarites here. I do like the way you use direct address to stimulate thought in the reader too. Effective use of questions throughout, how many times do we have those nagging doubts in our minds? Your final stanza could so easily have been immediately transferred directly from my own thoughts, I find myself in this situation every day, and it doesn't matter what anyone else says they don't understand, do they? Thanks for voicing this - I really liked it, but if there's one comfort, you are most definitely not alone in feeling like this.
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Thank you for taking out the time to read and comment this.
I did feel alone in this situation.
My heart was aching and still is.
I just don't know where to turn.
I didn't know that there were others out there in this same
situation.
As i read the comments i find that they are i do find some comfort in that although it's not comforting to know that
you guys are hurting either.
Just wish that all this would come to a head and my heart would stop the aching and my prayers would be answered
but it's not all that simple..
Thank you again.
Your words were all to kind and lift some spirit for me today as well as the comments .
Thanks again !
-Mandi
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Yes, I've been there
Then I found Providence had saved me from being with him; he was dishonest, inconsiderate, and just not right for me. God may not be punishing you, my dear, but protecting you. The boy I loved pulled the wool over my eyes. Only God saved me in time from getting engaged to him. You may not want to hear this, or think it, but he may not be the right one.
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Yes, i've had the same problem and i've asked the same q's.
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