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One Day--Too Late

The reality--of the cause,

to what I once was,

burns inside my mind

as I leave you behind.

  

It is sobering to say,

how I let you get away,

because now I am dying

and you believe I'm lying.

 

I'm trying to tell you--

I want to see us through.

But you say "I'm too late",

We can't fix the mistake.

  

Resigning what was mine,

everyone says I'll be fine.

But, that's not how it feels,

am I just spinning wheels?

 

Because it's one day--to late.  

  

 

Author notes

Song inspired prompt.
The Group SEETHER
The song
Fine again

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CRENKvMr2XM

I listened to it like 20 times... It's a great song... I'm going to download it to my ipod.

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  • Unsigned gold member
    August 18, 2008
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    Nice ....very nice

    One day too late I'm in hell....


    Yep...

    Si