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"Genesis"

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The first time I saw you,
I couldn't turn away.
I was enchanted by your beauty
beyond what any words can say.

The first time I met you,
I was so, absurdly shy.
I stumbled on the words
I was trying to imply.

The first time we dated,
I was trying to do my best
to be on my 'Best Behavior'
so you would be impressed.

The first time we kissed,
there was magic in the air.
I savored the sweetness of your lips
and the passion that was there.

The first time we embraced
in the act of making love,
could only be described
as a miracle from above.

You were everything and more
that I expected you to be.
You became the essence of my life
that I had searched for endlessly.

The first time I fell in love,
it was glorious and new
and I am ever thankful,
that I fell in love with you!




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by SingPraiz4Hym

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  • maralisa silver member
    July 28, 2008

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    I stumbled on the words I was trying to imply.The first time I fell in love,it was glorious and new and I am ever thankful, that I fell in love with you!a beatiful poem full of deep thoughts and feelings good luck in the contest


  • SingPraiz4Hym
    July 27, 2008

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    I loved the flow of this and all the firsts that were expressed. The progression was so true and I could visual it as I read. Thanks for entering. Good luck.