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A Speck Of Dust

I had a thought
thinking, there it was.
Was off the wall
walled inside my head,
heading off a clearer trail;
trailing off
off, where I simply follow.

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  • Mairi bheag gold member
    October 25, 2008

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    I like the way you have done this. I like its terseness, its lack of "high poetry", and the association of the wreathed words thought-thinking, wall-walled, head-heading. Bravo. Good stuff.

  • ea silver member
    September 25, 2008

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    This is a great little wreath, Tirrell. I like how slight it is; maybe you could add the link to this in the comments of this new column I have written about the wreath so people can see another example: http://allpoetry.com/column/2346469 I was sorry to see you had removed your silver winning wreath (about the sleigh) from the original contest but I thought of you again today as I was writing a wreath for this contest: http://allpoetry.com/contest/2421855 There are still possibilities with wreath in the title left to pick from these Yankee Candle scents, Autumn Wreath and Christmas Wreath.


  • suseann
    July 30, 2008

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    Fleeting thoughts culminate into a plithera of solutions in time.But time is fleeting. This is how this piece is interprated by my novice poetic abilities. NICELY PROPOSED IDEAS.