No more money on the roll
clogging up my toilet bowl
plunge and plunge it won't go down
expensive water all around
hear that gurgle gurgle sound
no more money to be found
Author notes
Capital letter at the beginning no punctiation intentionally.
A contest entry
- An Itty Bitty Quickie... by Ithica.
700 points, ended August 2, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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This was funny, I laughed out loud- great job ith the rhyme. Thanks for your great entry and good luck to you.
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I just love your work, this is very cute!!
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LOL!
Great job!
I needed a laugh. 
of that trophy. Great timing & flow with a fast beat & impeccable rhyme. 
Round & round it goes, where it stops no one knows. 
for us all! Toilet paper is expensive as is clean H2O nowadays! 
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never meant to last my friend...never meant to last.
Let roll...
I like this...very cleaver...the old Irish saying...
If time and money are the same,
lets spend it all on this silly game,
and when it's gone you'll forget my name
but at least you'll always have
whats his name to blame.
Nice Job,
LOWELL POE
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This is very cute!!! I like it!!! Thanks for your entry!!!
cia 
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Very funny, a light hearted yet somewhat identifiable poem.
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this is very funny, i love all things about this,from the flow of words to rhyming,to the background.thank you for sharing & best of luck to you in the contest.......
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