Words ricochet like a boomerang,
echoes in the wind, reminders
of actions spilled on blank pages,
emotionally effective.
Author notes
"What we say and what we do ultimately comes back to us so let us own our responsibility, place it in our hands, and carry it with dignity and strength." - Gloria Anzaldua
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Aw of course I like this one it is some what like my boomerang poem, it is amazing what one simple word rarly used can devour in ones mind well done.
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Very piercing words, delivered by a bow that can only shoot its arrow over a short distance.But the blow is nonetheless forceful.Well done!
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Like this Samantha. Manages to convey depth in only a few lines. Well done.
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terrific take on the prompt
this was good -
ooohh, this is very nice, i really like the ending..and the use of boomerang
good luck in the contest and take care
Stephanie ♥
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