five cats all lined up
mewing for their morning meal
stampede the food dish
A contest entry
- Open Your Windows by ea.
500 points, ended July 31, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Smile... all the while...
Comments
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a good piece of poetry, i will let you in on a secret, i telepathically trained them all to come to your door for food


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This is a colorful haiku that brings back memories of life on the farm, for sure! Thank you.
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That's beautiful. I have only two cats myself, one who carries on as if to say "Hurry up with that can and don't be so dang fussy" and another who just looks at me plaintively with those big eyes.
How do you manage with FIVE? Great write.

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lol Aye, feeding the five cats is a daily adventure into feline madness. There is one male and he dominates his mother and sisters. I pour the food out into five piles and sometimes he starts on one pile and then dashes around to put his claim on all five piles. The females then keep changing 'round to other piles. It's like kitty musical chairs.

Thank you!
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