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why

who wants to find oneself
after finally managing to lose onself

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bananasplit

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  • Life is a Beach gold member
    July 30, 2008
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    God...ain't that the truth!!!! ***Pam***


  • dreamersalwayslive
    July 28, 2008

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    Okay

    I think the poem was okay, but it seems more like a question then a poem to me, even though the question was a really good one. I think it could have been better by maybe expanding it a litte..? I dunno. It's still a very good write.


  • Olivias Violin
    July 27, 2008
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    Good one!