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Time (Hay(na)ku)

Time
Is forever
When you enjoy

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Prompt 4.Time.

In a list

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  • Never.Give.Up silver member
    August 11, 2008

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    Short, sweet and honest.

    I really likek the way this poem is so simplistic but at the same time it makes you think.

    A wonderfull write and I wish you all the best in the contest.

    Rose


  • InMyOwnGlassBox
    August 9, 2008

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    I love simplisity, this is the best of it too. I enjoyed it. It be how short it is really adds to the meaning too. awsome