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You're beautiful

My boy

My boy

Do you know how beautiful you are?

The way you are right now,
I wanna hold this image forever
The being of my pleasure
I beg my mind to remember.

How is it your lips curl so right?
And your eyes shine so bright
That I need to no other light?
Oh, just to hold you tight,
If only we were alone.

You’re so sweet,
A heart of honey
A way of treating me, oh so right
You’re so funny
You raise me up
My love-built kite.

I see you because you’re beautiful
You’re beautiful because you see me
We share in life’s plights
And isn’t that the key?

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Beauty
Tyra Banks
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  • Surprise Poet
    August 19, 2008
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    Loving words....


  • Sound of Madness
    July 30, 2008

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    Thanks for entering my contest. You did a beautiful job on this. It's very sweet. I enjoyed reading it.

  • LaurenLightning--x
    July 27, 2008
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    Aww this is beautiful.
    It's put a huge smile on my face =]
    The imagery you create in this piece is beautiful. I especially love the lines :

    You raise me up
    My love-built kite.

    so pretty!

    Well done, this is a lovely poem and one I truly enjoyed reading.
    oh and best of luck in the contest you have entered!

    LaurenLightning--x