Not to come across rude
don't come unglued
I have to make my case...
Have you had a sunburn
on a bright and sunny day?
Maybe you can appreciate
what I am about to say...
Take your white lite
and make it less bright,
give it a little shade.
It's whiteness is disturbing
when it's all aimed this way.
Life's energies has many tones
that I can't even see
when one walks around
with their high beams on
constantly causing me
to swerve to the left
or dip to the right
off the the road of
of my own spirituality.
A contest entry
- Wiccan...Pagan...Magical Writes! by SummerlandRayne.
313 points, ended August 7, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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The ending "swerve to the left, or dip to the right, off the road of my own spirituality" wrapped up what I think you were trying to convey here really well.
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The light is too bright? I am always looking for more light...LOL! Very clever write on religious freedom! I understand you point here clearly. Thanks for the entry and best of luck.
Blessed Be~
Az
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