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Faded Night

The night has fallen apart
In my hand
In my heart
Sworn to stand between the man
Sending my brouther away
From what I am
He knows nothing of my plan
Could I break it?
The silence within
Grips me again
Feeding from a pulse
I can hear again
I am still here again
And again
I will never
Surrender to the
Silence within

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  • hazeleyedfreak
    July 27, 2008

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    Conflicting

    That would be hard, keeping the biggest secret from all your loved ones. Very good piece, I loved that you put a brother in there. Thank you for entering and Good Luck!