The games of love
What is this? i hate it.
Because we both know that ill come back to you
Weather your good or bad.
It’s like playing hide and seeks
I can’t find the real you no matter where i look
You’re a mystery and…
It gets me irritated. I hate it!
Your lips that don’t find their way to mine
And you know you’re playing with my mind
You sicken me but i love you...
So I deal with no kisses until
You put your lips to mine.
So I deal with no hugs until you put your arms around me.
And hold me tight for dear life.
The tears that fall you'll make them stop
When you say "I love you, no matter what."
Is this the game of love?
I feel it...
but do you.
Author notes
option #2 "things you hate about love" / Dedicated to a handsom yet mysterious boy.
A contest entry
- Give me something origional by SouthernDownpour.
1183 points, ended August 12, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love by blaq roze.
650 points, ended August 7, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
made for this contest tell me what you think ^_^
Comments
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to love someone for eternity without the knowledge of that love ever being returned, NOW that's what i call devoted...good job there, good luck in the contest
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lol, sorry i forgot to add this part. altho i liked your poem i think the beginning needs a little work. it doesnt flow as well as the rest of it.
"Because we both know that ill come back to you
Weather your good or a jerk."
i have to be honest i didnt like that line.but it's just my opinion. take it if you want if not... then dont lmao.
but it is a great piece. thanks for entering.
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I have to agree with symphony with this. it went straight to the heart. haha she even stole my fav part. but it's okay i'm going to comment anyway.lol
"Your lips that dont find their way to mine
And you know you’re playing with my mind
You sicken me but i love you..."
love can be so magical in the beginning, thats all i know. it seems to fade tho and i'v seen it happen so many times. in the beginning theres lots of kisses hugs, hand holding, those gentle touches, smiles that take your breath away, that look that just melts your heart. but after awhile it just fades. atleast it does for me.
then my ex came along.pfft she put me in my place haha. i fell so hard.but i just had to wait till she wanted a hug or a kiss. that gentle touch.i hated that. i know how it is tho. enought about me now >.>
anyway this is fantastic and i wish you luck in the contest
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Oh girl ... this went straight to my heart, particularly the verse that said,
"Your lips that don’t find their way to mine
And you know you’re playing with my mind
You sicken me but i love you..."
I so know how that feels; I fancied myself to be falling in love with a good friend of mine for some time [three years] whom I'd had a serious crush on for some eight years .... And when we finally got together, I waited for the violins, the angels singing, the knowledge that we loved each other - and it never came.
'You sicken me but I love you...' <-- describes it perfectly; you're so lost in love, that you long for him to feel the same - and even when he doesnt you keep trying, hoping, wishing ... And letting go can be the hardest thing ever as for moving on, well ... !!!
Absolutely loved this; truly; and hope your situation works out [if its based on reality] also good luck in the contest
- Symphony
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