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The lion falls for the lamb.

Prowling for food, the lion preys.
Until he sees a lamb, just like any day.
This lamb was different, in an odd way.
This emotion was new, what it was, the lion couldn't say.

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Team Edward. Heck yeah!

Saint Sorrow.

I chose the quote "So, the lion falls for the lamb"

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  • Missa
    July 27, 2008

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    ok, you need to put yout potion and your username by monday or you will br DQed. but i loved your poem. its so cute


  • Silent Emotions
    July 27, 2008

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    as soon as i saw the title i just knew it was twilight related, which is awesome. =)

    i really like how simple this is but it sums up how he feels about her.

    awesome!!!


  • amanda vampiress
    July 27, 2008

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    Interesting!

    Very enjoyable read. It reminded me of the children's story about the mouse and the lion for some odd reason. I think its very witty and rhymes smoothly. keep up the good work.