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We Are

We exist,in different
planes,
levels,
dimensions.

Part of all,
simple energy,
complex in
make-up.

Spiritual
beings,
in human
shells.

Able to
change,
with pure
intent.


Author notes

1. Do we exist?
9. What is our power to change it?

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  • Dark Otter
    July 29, 2008

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    Unique combo!

    You speak well in your brevity. "Able to change with pure intent" is a great finish. I wish that you had taken me to the ends of the universe. It would've been a great trip!


  • aboomer silver member
    July 27, 2008

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    Short, deep and to the point! I love your wording in this - well done!
    best wishes in the contest.


  • nature mithya
    July 27, 2008

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    Of course we exist as part of the energy

    The power to change is defined by God the supreme energy.
    You put your finger in the right place when you talk of different levels and plains.
    For me Energy (Supreme Energy= God)makes up the universe this energy distributes to different macro and micro levels where the thought probably are the very minute quantum's of energy.
    Lol
    Congrats to you for picking the topic.