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Peeled Away

I watch her dance;
I watch her sway.
I turn my head a minute,
Then I glance her way.

She smiles at me,
But has nothing to say.
She does the splits
To collect her pay.

And I can tell it'll be
The perfect end to the perfect day
As her last bit of clothes
Is peeled away.

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  • xrain dancerx
    August 10, 2008

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    oh...as usual it took me a second to figure out what it was about xD. dirty scott dirty! but yet brillant. hahaha.
    *hugs* tay.


  • pretty-r-a-v-e-girl
    August 10, 2008

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    There are enough suttle hints in this just to give you taste of what's going on. Very well done, tasteful, yet I feel so dirty after reading it.


    • Genesis
      August 10, 2008
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      Dirty after reading it??? Try watching it and not feel dirty. lol jk....


  • Ho74pp1eP1e
    July 29, 2008

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    Hummmmmm

    This is good, I like how it is soft. Not to dirty, or hard core. When most talk or write of a stripper it is rather corse. Well done.


  • theburninglegend silver member
    July 27, 2008

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    hahaha

    I AM IN LOVE WITH A STRIPPER YALL,


    HAHAHAH, lol you have nailed the piece to its place lol. like this one, should play the I am In love with a striper yall, lol good piece though,

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