Hey, Mom!
Come here!
I have a new friend!
What?
You cant see him?
You know I don't pretend!
A Doctor,
I don't need it!
Why, do you think I'm insane?
Medicine?
To make him go away?
Fine, I'll get him off my brain.
I miss him.
He was my best friend
He only comes around when I forget those pills.
Mom,
I'm sorry,
I swear, HE did the kills!
Locking me away?
For what reason,
I am innocent, I know it's true.
I am here.
At the asylum.
He did it, but they have no clue.
A contest entry
- Am I crazy? {Options!!} by sins and sorrow.
575 points, ended August 3, 2008, 27 entries
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Comments
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wowe... i like the story-like flow in this piece! its awesome!
keep writing!
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Love the questions asked throughout this poem!
Very nice, you did a great job using the option you chose!
Bravo!!
Thanks for entering and good luck! -
ooooo i like this. i agree it is kinda creepy, but it really works. very nice
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oh my..
kinda creepy.. but amazingly creepy..lol
~~AngieMarie
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