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Through Living Water

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Journeying through life finding myself searching,
turbulence of storms passing through seasons
reflecting within my hearts desires with thought,
brought me to the Lord God and His Living Word.

 



Glistening sun rippling through silent souls,
hearts touched, burning with passionate loving fire
thirsting for living water in which purify's ones being,
when shared is spiritually cleansing of roots deep within.

Thanking God for infinite wisdom of inner truths freeing,

learning to live through life's storms holding onto heart's
abounding beauty, lying within God's wondrous creation,  natures beauty brings silence still, through His

Living Word.

 

 

Written by: Kelle Marie Stavron

July 27, 2008

 

 

 

 

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Please put photo credit in AN: Chris Ardelean

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 2, 2008

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    Oh this is awesome

    If you knew how very much I so love the beauty that God places before us each and every day it keeps me in ahw. Lovely write here honey


  • Rose Angel gold member
    August 24, 2008

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    This wonderful write speaks for itself of your deep faith in Gods' wonderful word carrying you through lifes storms, and peacefully giving you rest...His word an anchor for your soul...Such a lovely write dear sis! Bravo for your faith!


  • Roaddog Wolf
    August 13, 2008

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    This is a fabulous take on the prompt as well as a very wonderful write on the breath of spiritual blessings and the gifts God has blessed us with in wisdom heart and soul, good write

    thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest


  • penman gold member
    July 30, 2008

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    Wonderful

    I think your piece is very inspirational. It is a nice spiritual take on the picture. You expressed you faith very well. Best of luck in the contest.

  • restful.soul
    July 30, 2008

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    thirsting for living water in which purify's ones being,
    when shared is spiritually cleansing of roots deep within. what a beautiful few lines! the whole poem was breathaking. Flowed excellently and incredible language used. It was so unforced i loved it


  • catz Moderators member
    July 30, 2008

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    The pictures are beautiful and you've added more to their beauty with your inspirational words of testimony to God's love.

    This is an amazing piece, Sis A wonderful freeform poem. I wish you best of luck in the contest

    love and
    Dee

  • Lady Mak
    July 30, 2008

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    This is a truely beautiful inspiring write, a true gem!!! Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. big huggggs, thank you for this wonderful wrie, more big huggggs.



  • melphleg gold member
    July 29, 2008

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    What a beautiful way to describe and tell you testimony. You have been cleanse and though you struggle through tough times, you draw ever closer to the source of living water.


  • Arkbear gold member
    July 27, 2008

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    Such a beautiful expression of love and life ~

     

    Gods' living word.....and His infinate wisdom.....gosh, what a Grreat Father we have awaiting us ~

     

    God bless you,

     

    Bear ~


  • crazymomma
    July 27, 2008

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    I am awed by the fact that you incorporated all the pictures so well within this lovely poem. Your spirituality shines brightly through your words. The imagery is amazing and the words powerful. I especially loved the reference to water rippling through one's soul kind of like being baptised. This is an excellent write and very peaceful and calming. Good luck in the contest


  • Angelflower
    July 27, 2008

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    Oh! what a very wonderful and emotional read.. I really loved this.. You did such a wonderful job in expressing so much here... Bravo!! I wish you the best of luck in the contest! I really enjoyed reading this..


    Angel


  • FakingItForReal
    July 27, 2008

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    I loved this! I'm in awe of the seamless flow and vivid imagery you used here. Keep up the good work!

  • goalsv
    July 27, 2008
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    A beautiful look at the pictures in words. I love the christian tone and substance.


  • Talking Toni gold member
    July 27, 2008

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    What Beauty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    First of all, the pictures ae just georgous!!! You words bring a sense of clm to the storms of life and wisdom resounds throughout this entire piece...Like sitting in quiet refection and and being in the presence of God and conversing with him through nature his voice speak volumes when we sit and reflect on the still quiet beauty he has offered up to us in this world...Sometimes all we need to do is to get away and go t our quitet places and sit and wait upon him to speak wisdom to us...Great job Kelle thought provoking and just beautiful once again!!!!Love to you!!!~~Toni~~


  • Sensuity
    July 27, 2008

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    Oh wow...I am speechless, but then again i have to express how i felt.I must say that this piece had GOD smiling I am sure since it has captivated my heart and the depth of its spirituality has drawn me deeper still.Lovely to read and boy can you free verse,No wonder I can't!


  • dustookie2
    July 27, 2008

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    The spirituality flowing from your heart is rippling out across the world.Brilliant take on the prompt pictures. I enjoyed the journey. Good luk in the contest. We live within a presence that is the natural world surrounding us all.


  • Asylaarix
    July 27, 2008

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    I am absolutely in love with this piece ... Don't EVER tell me that you aren't good with free verse, cause hunny, that was one of the best free verses I have ever read! You're a natural born poetess! Go on girl, do your thing, make things happen with your heavenly words of wisdom, love & truth ... I loved this!

    Much Love & Respect
    Chantelle

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