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Happy birthday wishes to a
half-a-cent’ry gent!
You’ve presents all in boxes
with a geometric bent -

Just view them as a cubist,
combo innards and the outs,
the friendly low-life joker’s
and the pricey, thoughtful hautes’.

Should mind, forgetting, start a-fretting
(aging’s slow decline ),
Why! Get your portrait painted now,
ere Time will redefine!

Your essence, have preserve-ed
by an artist you admire,
just studying your noble face
new art form may inspire --

Consider Ambroise Vollard,
with obtusely angled eyes,
expansive cubic cranium
Picasso glorifies!

Beneath those ears [or whiskers],
crumples spread beneath his chin,
enfold his fav’rite waistcoat,
naught elicits manly grin...


(he’s brooding on the laundress
his new wife’s just taken in!)





Author notes

http://www.artchive.com/artchive/p/picasso/vollard.jpg

And why shouldn't cubism have had such a practical beginning?
Happy Birthday!

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  • parenchma
    October 21, 2008

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    Gold by jeff. Verry impressed. Of course, Jeff is in the place where he's not looking older, he's looking better. Funny how that works...

    i recognized the contest from the first 2 lines


  • toomysterious
    August 24, 2008

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    Wow! I really enjoyed this. It made me feel good and cheery. Congratulations on your well-deserved Gold.


  • Twinstar
    August 21, 2008

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    Hoodwink!!!

    AWESOME WRITE! excellent rhyme and rhythm. Very well written, and a pleasure to read...

    Congrats on the gold, well deserved.

    Love & Light
    Debbera


  • tawk gold member
    August 21, 2008

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    Hood-Winked!

    Awesome write and congrats on the Gold!! Amazing imagery and emotion throughout thanks for sharing and have a blessed and wonderful day! Theresa


  • Polaja Greeters member
    August 21, 2008

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    Hood-Winked!

    I really love this poem congratulations on the gold - very well deserved indeed! Brilliant direction from the prompt and a delightful read as well - very clever!

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • cricketjeff gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    I thoroughly enjoyed this from start to end, definitely in the box where all good poetry shhould be!

    Sorry it has taken me so long to get to the comments.


  • Lyndon gold member
    August 9, 2008
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    Congrats. on the Gold!

    I enjoyed this verse very much. Intelligent humour! I love that. Lyndon.


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    July 30, 2008

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    Yay! You won Gold! Another accomplished poet recognizes your genius!

  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    July 28, 2008
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    "Beneath those ears [or whiskers],"
    Love your take out box, and cubism jest! Written tongue in cheek, it's a very clever poem, m'lady!


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    July 27, 2008

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    This is a very funny birthday wish for an accomplished poet. You have done a great job with this. The rhyme and flow are very well done.

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