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"Flickering Candles"

Candles flicker,
In the dead of night.
Lighting that room,
Filled with,
Our empty memories.
Worthless,
Chess matches.
Old forgotten books.
Stories written,
Inside those walls.
Candlelit parties,
Still linger,
About that room.
Just the thought,
Of you,
Takes me away,
To that room.
The room,
You murdered,
Me inside of.
My blood,
Stained into,
Everything.
The floor,
The walls,
The chessboard,
Chess pieces,
Those Books,
And our,
Memories.

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Picture inspiration - http://tn3-2.deviantart.com/fs15/300W/i/2007/042/e/2/romantic___by_ramawka.jpg

Picture Credit - Romantic by:ramawka

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  • xXDarkChildXx
    July 27, 2008

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    Such a lovely poem and great take on the picture of course. I loved it!! The short lines really kept my attention x3 and you know or should know how bad I can get with attention and how I can trail off... so, awesome write! LATERS!