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I stood in the street and said I'm hollow and sad
someone walked by and replied too bad

one, two, three and four
tell me not to move and close the door
I'm tired and weak and happy to please
I feel wanted and I feel at ease

I want to die and hurt myself all night long
stop my hand and scream at me to let it go
hold me and say I mean the world to you
just like when we kissed and said hello

I felt fine yesterday but now I want to die
but I know you'll run and catch me before things go white
kiss my head and tell me not to cry
and tell me it's okay I hurt myself last night

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  • eraced
    1 day ago
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    that's deep and beautiful. I've been there. trying as always to hold on. so stay strong, your not alone. just keep going one breath at a time.

    tired.Insomnia on the borderline.~erAced~


  • peregrin
    July 27, 2008

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    I like this, and it made me cry, because I have felt that so many times, like right now, and it is so true.