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Mystical Child

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"Whose child are you?"
They asked

"I am a child
of every man,"
she said
"A child of every land"

"Where is the womb
And the breasts
That suckled you?
Who is the father
That nurtured
And loved you?"

"My womb is
The Universe
and I was suckled
and nourished
by the breasts
of the sweet earth

As for my father
every man
is this to me
He cradles me
in his arms
like the ever-giving sea

I have no birth place
for I was never born
The stars have
clothed my body
and the breath
of the wind I have worn

For I am still suckling
at the breasts
of the earth
A fetus preparing
for eternal birth "   








     

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  • we are indeed children endlessly growing and learning
    this is the purpose of life.
    we were never born and we never die,
    we are all children of the light
    beautiful, insightful and a joy to read
    God bless you my friend...


  • Gypsie Ink
    July 30, 2008

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    Stunning!

    Powerful and beautiful! I love "The stars have clothed my body and the breath of the wind I have worn" A truly sensational and magickal write. I am blessed to have read it.


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    July 27, 2008

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    AMAZING!!!

    This is pure beauty! I really do love this poem...thank you so very much for entering! Best of luck...

    Blessed Be~
    Az


    • kareneisenlord gold member
      July 27, 2008
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      Thank you!

      I am glad that you like it, and most of all, that you appreciate it!


  • Rheea gold member
    July 26, 2008
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    ahh sister I am so not wiccan but I love you to pieces and this is a beautiful write.


    • kareneisenlord gold member
      July 27, 2008
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      Thank you dearheart. I hope that all is well with you these days. It's good to hear from you! *hug*

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