DANCE
As we move together I feel we are one
Arms and legs in sync not to be outdone
We dance with such emotion never letting down
Me in a tuxedo you a gorgeous gown
Spinning twists and then a dip follow our embrace
Setting up our torrid moves with elegance and grace
You’re staring right into my eyes we never miss a beat
It seems as if the dance floor, doesn’t ever touch our feet
At the moment of our choice I raise you in the air
Arms stretched tight I hold your legs in a perfect flare
We are entranced the two of us as if we are alone
I hold you there so silently as if we’re cut from stone
Our hearts now meld in sensual feelings showing who we are
For we have danced the dance of love our heads are in the stars
A contest entry
- Ecstasy of Movement by MortalPhoenix.
700 points, ended July 30, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like how the title, though simple, really shows what this is about. You are writing about dance, which isn't as simple as it would seem, and you give it depth and meaning.
Well penned.
~lost
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A great poem and very well written. My only critique is that the title is not very original.
Thanks for entering my contest and good luck!
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