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Inside & Outside

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Thoughts inside this box are to contained
Emotions need room to spread vibrant wings
Within total confinement leaving no room
How can I ever dance, how can I ever zoom?

Outside this plain cube there's lots of air
That spreads our imagery vividly with flair

Poet's need plenty of wide open spaces
Creating mystical pictures, many faces
If our skills were locked within six walls
Prodigy's are lost in an long unending hall

Emotions need room to spread vibrant wings
Thoughts inside this box are to contained

 

Well am in the box with no room to fly

Confined in a corner; ready to just cry!








Author notes

~~~~HAPPY BIRTHDAY~~~~

Prompt: I keep being told to think outside the box, how unoriginal is that?

"All poet's think outside the box".....

photo art by: ƒernando

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  • cricketjeff gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    Different again and it is always a joy to read your verse.
    Thank you for the entry and I am sorry I have left you in the corner waiting for a comment for quite so long. Thanks for entering one of my most enjoyable contests to date.


    • ennovy silver member
      August 10, 2008
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      CricketJeff

      Thank you very much for reading this piece I composed about the box....ennovy


  • Angelflower
    July 27, 2008

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    Oh! I really enjoyed this! you did such a wonderful job with the iamgery and flow here! I really loved the way it just paints beauty! in it's own way that is Bravo! Thank you very much for sharing this .. I wish you the best of luck with the contest!

    Angel


  • FakingItForReal
    July 27, 2008
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    I loved this! I'm in awe of the seamless flow and vivid imagery you used here. Keep up the good work!


  • FakingItForReal
    July 27, 2008

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    I loved this! I'm in awe of the seamless flow and vivid imagery you used here. Keep up the good work!

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