you made up your mind,
i don't think its best,
cuz if you ask me,
he's just a pest,
now it's all over,
no chance to renew,
just told you off,
we'll never talk again,
but yet BOO HOO
this pain is unbearable,
unbearable yes,
i tear up my phone,
cuz of that pest,
well i need a new friend,
cuz i just lost my best,
must be pretty and sweet,
oh"must text".
A contest entry
- Breakups by slippingofftheedge.
300 points, ended August 22, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poetry, Poetry and PreWrites! by Lost Vampyre Angel.
1200 points, ended September 13, 2008, 340 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Simple... yet moving and to the point, as well as strong. There's emotion flowing through this that can be captured by the reader. Great job.
Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing.
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Adorable.
Warmest,
Mylee -
Sweet!
Thanks for entering and good luck -
rhyming sounds a little awkward. i like the cute-syness to it
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thats pretty sweet son, no doubt.
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