The truth
Needs not be spoken
A look in my eyes
My message can't be broken
It's written there
For all to see
It's not just what I think
It's a part of me
It requires no words
It doesn't need to be said
No matter what I do
You are always in my head
Author notes
"It does not require many words to speak the truth." ~ Chief Joseph
Dunno where this came from. Not the greatest. Not horrible, though, either. Just above that. It kind of sounds unfinished to me, but I'm just leaving it like that because I don't feel like writing any more.
A contest entry
- Dark, Light, and In Between by Wandering Woodchuck.
550 points, ended August 9, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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amazing write just the rhyming flowed so perfect every emotion was spilled through the words great job babe
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Aww, a love poem from my matage, it is not horrible either so stop down talking your own poetry. *tries to look stern* Good luck.
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You know how much I criticize my own work. I'm just a really tough critic when it comes to myself.
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You have penned a very sweet poem. I like the rhyme and flow. You also captured the spirit of the quote very well.
Great job. Thanks for entering.
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