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Joker Poem 1.

My empty eyes look into the street
In this paper-white skin, it's deathly cold
The black sky is a heavy sheet
To hide me as the night unfolds

I touch my thin hands to my bony face
Forgetting the pasty mask I wear
Against my frigid body, the icy winds race
Whipping through my mangled green hair

I feel nothing; I never feel
Perhaps I've forgotten how
I've burried myself, rather than let the wounds heal
It's too late--healing's impossible now

Until the world ends, this is all I will be:
One big impulse; an empty shell
And even if there's a soul, burried deep within me,
I know he'll be burning in Hell.

Author notes

Um...my first All Poetry poem

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  • Eusebius
    July 29, 2008

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    This is some pretty neat and nifty poetry with pretty darn good rhyme! bravo... bravo... bravo...


  • ByeAPCommunity
    July 27, 2008
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    I OWN THIS!!!! ahhahahahahahahahahaha
    i love ya, ain. beeeeeeefffffffff
    ur da best


  • FieryHollow
    July 26, 2008

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    Anna this is amazing! It describes the Joker perfectly! It's flow and rhyme scheme are excellent. You could have a future in poetry! Great one


  • Aquarius
    July 26, 2008
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    Aweee I LOVEEEE it!
    Good, good job Mrs. Joker!