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A question of reality

Blurred visions of unmistakable beauty,
a heavenly notion of perfection

Through the desperate walls,
of emotion came a moment of clarity

Things once so fuzzy to my eye,
now shown like a bright summer day

The beauty once for told to me,
now disgusting pieces of refuse

Preferring my alternate reality,
I cast aside the bottle

Drowning the medication,
that shown me the truth

If the blurred vision was insanity,
that would be my home

No longer did I crave,
what the world call sane

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I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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  • Deceits Tears silver member
    July 27, 2008
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    I really like this
    Good luck in the contest


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    July 26, 2008

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    Nice job. I wondered how people would deal with this quote. I like your take on it. Thank you for entering.

  • Aisades
    July 26, 2008

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    Poe

    Mr. Poe was a capricorn. A deep, dark and murky cappi. His work is genius and I can understand his dark longing, and heart.