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Daydream

Staring out my window pane

Waiting for another moment to pass me by

Glancing at the mockingbirds

Flapping their wings to the beat of your heart

Watching the doves in the sky

Fly and play around

Feeling the cool breeze run down my backbone

And feel my spirits dance in my soul

Hearing voices of other children

Laughing and playing outside

Taking a breath for everyday

I daze in the sunlight

Smelling the sweet nectar

Of an iris flower

And thinking about tomorrow's

Never ending day

What does it make you think about?

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  • Redeemed15
    July 26, 2008
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    I remember a poem or two that I've written like this.