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Lovestory

Within walls of a room
Candle light up the night
Laid on the chess board
Moves we shall play craftfully
Its checkmate we bow down to willfully

Sitting on the cold grounds
We shall cover with blanket of our bare bodies
Reading through the chapters of love
We shall write our book of passion

Pages sway with winds of our breaths
Exhaling fire of our desires
Under the burning candles of timeless compassion
We shall sow the seeds of our affection

Reading within lines
Writing with our lips
On pages of our skin
From the start to the end
From head to toe
A story we shall write
Within these walls of romance

The room awaits its destiny
Of an Oscar winning story
With breeze as witness
Under the burning candles
Romance shall live its life
…never ending love story

Lights, camera, action…
All it needs is you and me…

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Oops! my evil twin came up with this piece (lol) - just don't tell our family

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  • SouthernDownpour
    July 27, 2008
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    wow, i loved this. that came out amazing with the prompt. hot!


  • Truetome
    July 27, 2008
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    this was beautiful! truetome


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    July 27, 2008

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    you have the mind of a great poet, that wasn't what i meant to say i had something more creative but i forgot it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • hotchocolate gold member
    July 26, 2008
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    You did so good with the pic. prompt! Good Luck in the contest!


  • faithwhisperer silver member
    July 26, 2008
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    I love this idea! Well done! Best in the contest!


  • Asylaarix
    July 26, 2008

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    This was hott!!! I loved it ... wow ... what a take on the picture prompt! I'm very very impressed ... this was beautiful and stunning ... and wow ... thank you for your entry ... good luck in the contest!

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