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This Night


It was through the gate
of ceaseless venture
where we first met

on that fate and timeless night

You,
from your land of dawning
where saints of roses nestle
betwixt the harborage of bays mist
and unheard grapevines,

that meet the sea

Let us engage
among the winds
of ‘morrows kiss
where thickets of conceivings
wallow through
sweet dreams of everlast

Come with me my dear
and flame my wick
of candles night
you, my lost wind
of deathless eyes,

you,
my muse of heavens
creaking gate

Share with me our
bite of hope
as I slowly
lick the wounds
of your past
and heal
of always

your days to be

Spread your light
upon
river’s mouth
and hold
firm veins
within your
open and
shadowed glory

Satiate
your rich longing
as I criss cross
gushing landscapes

burrowing
into those secret
sounds
and untying
the skintight knot
of solitude

You are the song
and plants and waves,
of shouts and foam

And broken statues
of burnt water

And yet,

if,
you still
can not
see between the
fondness
that you hold

so entirely

listen to the voice
inside

your heart
will somehow,
let you know


And so,
please,
don’t read
into my words
or pages filled

of light,

anything
except for you,

the endless love
I have,


this night


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  • Virgoan
    August 20, 2008

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    Wow! I am really in awe reading your poem. The way you delivered the images just soothes the readers mind.

    A well deserve win.

    Thanks for sharing your gift.


    HENSLEY

  • Antonio Valentino
    August 15, 2008
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    Thank you dear poets for the honor.
    Very much appreciated!

    Antonio


  • tara wilson gold member
    August 14, 2008
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  • Dalaney gold member
    August 3, 2008
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  • tara wilson gold member
    August 2, 2008
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    This is one of my favorites in the contest.

    I love it.

    thanks so much for entering

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