there once was a man
who lived in a boot
he had so many mice
he jumped over the moon
once he returned
he sat on a wall
and all the kings horses
started to fall
then little jack nimble
yelled out to Rapunzel
"Tell Jill to be careful
so she doesn't tumble"
Then the man ran off
to have a talk with king cole
he wanted his sheep back
which Mary took to school
so the man ran down
to the muffin baker
and told gingerbread man
"I'll catch you later"
for the man had many
more tasks which to tend
and this is happily
the ever end.
Author notes
I picture it as taking a look inside the box and seeing everything meshed together.
A contest entry
- The Box by cricketjeff.
550 points, ended July 30, 2008, 20 entries
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Too good
I loved it, sorry it has taken me so long to get to these comments, I did read all the entries carefully then got dragged away before doing the next job.
All round one of the most fun contests I have run.
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Aha this is way cute
It made me laugh :] -
WOW!!!
This is hilarious!!! I love it Wishing you all the best in the contest!!! Peace, Cyn 
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Nicely done. I enjoyed the mishmash of everthing jumbled together. It was enjoyable from beginning to end.
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wow, you know this is creative and clever, i love it my friend i love it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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