Thinking inside the box,
doesn't give you much room.
But I guess that's good,
so your thinking doesn't consume you.
When you think inside the box,
does your thoughts get in the way?
Do you build a little window,
so they could float in to the day?
I like your box,
though it's a little plain.
But hey it's yours,
it doesn't matter what I think.
Happy birthday to you,
when that day will come.
Hey you should put your box,
out in the sun.
To keep you nice and worm,
along with all your thoughts.
And I like the idea,
of thinking inside the box.
A contest entry
- The Box by cricketjeff.
550 points, ended July 30, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i like the way you did this Jen, it is fun and light
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Great stuff
Thank-you so much for entering with such an enjoyable poem. I'm sorry that I have taken so long to post comments on every entry
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Thinking in your box will keep you there
That's not a bad analogy of a boxed thought, yeah I liked the way you interpreted the way one thinks. Well done. -
Keep you nice and warm (SP)
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