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Remission in Anarchy

Latch key kid
  to my coal heart
and he is moving on.

Promising
  to write my name in

cigarette ash

and a lovely cancer
    to never forget. 

The Southern man
      that keeps us all

sane

inside and out of
        all our big words. 

We would take over the world
      playing Scrabble.

The four of us,
                    psychotic magicians
each and every one.

But time moves forward

          and a summer

      is only nuclear

                      once.

Author notes

A sad fare thee well to an excellent secret admirer.

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  • celadia
    September 24, 2008
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    this is very thoughtful.


  • Loki silver member
    July 26, 2008

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    Great write. I think my shot at gold has diminished greatly. I still get a little tickle every time you mention the southerner or a reference to one of my poems.

    Much love baby girl.

    X.X.X.