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Man

I lay bare before you
Soul emits shine
Sliding on wheel of kismet
Dressed mannequin is my fate
In body of human
With heart you don’t see bleeding
Only a piece of meat
Roasted to perfection
Feelings hidden deep
Emotions folded
Untouched vulnerability
Chained within misconceptions
In the cage of stereotypes
Awaits its destiny
-The one to awaken the man inside

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    July 27, 2008

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    wow, i liked this poem, i this is something, i can't find the word right now, but i know it is something golden, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • nature
    July 27, 2008
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    You are good.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 27, 2008

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    All those misconceptions and stereotypes can indeed bind someone and weigh them down!! Only we can delve inside and awaken our destiny! Nice take