Looks can kill.
And looks also deceive...
Once I got into a triangle
Becaue the woman I was dating...
Befriended me...
Her brother...at the time was sick
And he was more imporant than I.
She wouldn't even let me call her...
So I innocently said ok...
And another woman entered my life..
She was an illegal...
But what a body she had...
And did she ever know how to use it...
To tease ...
But never finished the act.
It was all a put on...
Faking love only to get her papers.
I eventually figured this out
And left her...
Only after
I had already bought her a ring.
And a wedding dress too!
But she was a player...
She was engaged to another before me
But made me think I was her true lover.
Well, to make a long story short...
I got in hot wster with the first who had ignored me
And soon
I would loose both...
So men...
Be sure of the one you trust...
for...
You may not be as lucky as me!
As for being angry...
Well, I blew it off.
For broken hearts mend as time passes
And maybe neither women were meant for me...
I see it more as a lesson learned
Than hateful experiences...
For the wrongs they did...
dragonheart1
Author notes
Be careful of deceitful infatuation which is love disguised for gain.
A contest entry
- Write about an X its closure time by Shydreamer3.
450 points, ended September 3, 2008, 29 entries
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Comments
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So wait you were dating 2 women at once? i liked this bc it told a story, but that kind of confused me. thanks for the entry and i will definetly consider you just wanted to make sure i got that part right lol.
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wow a very sad poem we all have to be carefull with our heart they are one of the most precuias things we own good luck in the contest
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Awe thats horrible I am so sorry. To fall in love with a player is only successful when you convert the player to become a one person ... Nevermind.
Wanted to marry you to get her papers. When I was 20 I got 3 wedding proposals in 2 years time.
One was some guy had a crush on me since high school on the second fricken date. The second was my exfiance but he only did to get into my pants then we conveneitly broke up before any commitments had to actually happen.
the third was my husband who was born in Luxembourg, but
10 years and 3 babies later.
I don't tell many people all this but you know your poem just seemed fitting.
Hopefully you can find one that truely loves you we are not all deceptive only the bad apples. I had a bad apple male one
Hook the bad apples up they got stuff in commen LOL
Great write made me smile a little when I was feeling down.
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