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~Tempting~

Ribbons of silk permeate soft touches.
Billowy lips pierced, prompting a response.
Lusciousness luring you in;
as echoes escape betraying desires.
Secrets glide emotions in gentle breezes,
as you move closer.

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Picture Credit - Dark Lips by: grooveboxx

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  • creationsfromheart
    July 30, 2008

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    Very nice I loved the imagery in this it is wonderful, ha I guess I am behind on reading as all these are new so far. Or you are just writing a lot these days lol.


  • Asylaarix
    July 26, 2008

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    Nice! I loved the idea you put into this prompt. It came out very beautifully and pure with sensual exotic emotion! I absolutely loved it! Thank you so much for your entry and good luck in the contest!