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Evil Residents

Silent is the path I walk
until I come across
the ones which walk without a soul
where everything is lost
The dead that walk, can hide as well

And that, is when you'll need

a conscious mind, and ammunition

to stop the threat that feeds

When you've cleaned up all the scars

and still, all hope is gone

just look upon the STARS

to keep you safe till dawn

But still no one is safe

as the virus quickly spreads

again, you are too late

Your companions, reborn, dead

And now I am alone once more

I quickly close the drapes

This is the city's deathbed

And my last chance, my last escape...

 

 

 

 

 

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  • csmmoms2
    October 8, 2008

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    Whoa

    A very talented write... hard to believe you're just 15. Don't ever stop. " Keep your eye to the sky".


  • horrorfanatic
    August 8, 2008
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    sweeeeet

    this is way cool hehe im glad you told me to read it


  • The Hardest Goodbye
    July 26, 2008

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    Wow.
    I liked the part where you said "just look upon the STARS

    to keep you safe till dawn"


    Amazing piece Damarul <3