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Wonder

These really don't look like lips at all,
You know, so what perplexing hole,
So lipstick coated, cracked and chipped,
What am I seeing in this pic?

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Picture Credit - Dark Lips by: grooveboxx


27 Words

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  • Asylaarix
    July 26, 2008

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    Nice take on the prompt, I love how you were so powerful within your words, brought strength and emotion to your piece. Loved it, thank you so much for your entry and good luck in the contest.