perspicuous forces
of mental energy
~ raging ~
brilliance of mind's eye
impregnated with
~ imagination ~
illuminating afflatus
of mental energy
~ raging ~
brilliance of mind's eye
impregnated with
~ imagination ~
illuminating afflatus
Author notes
PROMPT:
Photo B ~ found on photobucket.com
15 words
afflatus ~ a strong creative impulse; divine inspiration
perspicuous ~ (of language) transparently clear; easily understandable
A contest entry
- - Speak to Me in 15 Words XXXII - by Desire.
700 points, ended July 31, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - BATTLE OF THE GOLD SHORTS 1 by Swan song.
2000 points, ended October 18, 2008, 43 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Excellent!


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Excellent piece in so few words, well deserved gold here. Nice imagery and thought to bloom. Well done!


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aww wow...no wonder you keep winning gold, this is brillant, keep it up and take care
Stephanie ♥

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WOOT!!!
Congratulations on the Gold awarded this great write!

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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Poetic Lucidity
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ Loved the words: impregnanted with ~imagination~ I'm seeing a hot air balloon take to the skies also for some reason I am being shown a picture in a wallet- looks like a man's billfold- like a man holding a little girl on his lap- Also being shown a blue crab... whether metaphor or symbolism
Hopefully this makes some sense~
Excellent take on the prompt ~
Powerful images & message You have brought forth
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~


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Simply devine, very creative and splendid word usage

Some well thought out poetry here.
Best of wishes to you



Tony


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This one was an interesting word to work with, you have done a wonderful job in this, vocab is excellent. Love, Chez


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Like a bolt from the heavens, inspiration strikes anytime, anyplace. Creating the impetus to produce an illuminating work of art. Wonderfully constructed with grand use of vocabulary, best to you in the contest, dear sis.


Mouser

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