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Poetic Lucidity

perspicuous forces
of mental energy
 
  ~ raging ~

brilliance of mind's eye
impregnated with

~ imagination ~

illuminating afflatus







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15 words

afflatus ~ a strong creative impulse; divine inspiration

perspicuous ~ (of language) transparently clear; easily understandable

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  • Swan song gold member
    October 18, 2008
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    Excellent!


  • PerfectImperfection
    August 13, 2008

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    Excellent piece in so few words, well deserved gold here. Nice imagery and thought to bloom. Well done!


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 2, 2008

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    aww wow...no wonder you keep winning gold, this is brillant, keep it up and take care
    Stephanie ♥


  • Grey Mouser
    July 31, 2008

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    WOOT!!!

    Congratulations on the Gold awarded this great write!


  • Desire gold member
    July 31, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Poetic Lucidity
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ Loved the words: impregnanted with ~imagination~ I'm seeing a hot air balloon take to the skies also for some reason I am being shown a picture in a wallet- looks like a man's billfold- like a man holding a little girl on his lap- Also being shown a blue crab... whether metaphor or symbolism
    Hopefully this makes some sense~
    Excellent take on the prompt ~
    Powerful images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • thepoetssoul
    July 28, 2008

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    Simply devine, very creative and splendid word usage
    Some well thought out poetry here.
    Best of wishes to you

    Tony


  • Cannonsfire
    July 28, 2008

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    This one was an interesting word to work with, you have done a wonderful job in this, vocab is excellent. Love, Chez


  • Grey Mouser
    July 27, 2008
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    Like a bolt from the heavens, inspiration strikes anytime, anyplace. Creating the impetus to produce an illuminating work of art. Wonderfully constructed with grand use of vocabulary, best to you in the contest, dear sis.

    Mouser

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