Do you have one too?, she asked him
and stared into his eyes
as he tried to comprehend
that mystery that lay
hidden beneath those cotton undies.
Oh Yes! he shouted
and then in awe, he analyzed the gem
that lay within his thighs
and with a regretful sigh he whispered
It is not like yours!
She smiled
afterall, men were born with half a brain her mommy had said
and in total understanding
she gave him that reassuring look
and as she patted him on his back she said to him
"Never mind that Johnny,
It will grow up to be like mine someday
Afterall you are a boy
And these things take time!"
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt : Outrageously Funny. by Jade.Butterfly.
300 points, ended July 29, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Laugh out Loud by Florida Sunshine.
525 points, ended September 12, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Would like some help in naming this piece..have some clue but am not exactly sure so title suggestions are welcomed!
Comments
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This reminds me of the 'Lil' Johnny jokes' ~ I certainly enjoyed the read of the whole thing. Thanks for entering the contest ~ it was my pleasure to read and review your work.
Best of luck to you,
Florida Sunshine
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This Is Funny
This is a great poem and I just loved it for it was very entertaining.
After all you are a boy
And these things take time!
To fun. Thank you for sharing your gift to write poetry with me. Very creative.
Many Blessings
Much Love
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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Thanks for the title...nicely thought of...look forward to reading the other enteries,very funny contest.
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YOu are very welcome.
I look forward to the other entries myself
Can't wait.
-Mandi
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NIcely done!!
I like how you did this piece.
I'm still giggling at it.
and as the title i think You might could call it
" The Gem"
Just a suggestion.
I enjoyed this very much.
Good look in contest.
-Mandi
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