Come; let’s share the feast of the unknown love
The path of nowhere but pure pleasure and seduction
Forever happiness waits once tasted by the bud
Fly with me between the loveliest distances of two points
There, I will burn your soul with elegant passion
And trap your mind by the unperceived secrets
Come; let’s take the curve
And live the life between two points
A contest entry
- A curve~~~ by Amarige.
475 points, ended August 1, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful entry to the contest..thank you and best of luck
Ruby
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I really loved the words you used to illustrate your poem here, they melded together so well, and the lines were fluid.
GREAT job
diggin it majorly
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