As the plague spreads upon the burnt bodies
And curtains are raised, unleashing the darkness.
The audience stands still, silent, in remorse, witnessing
The death process
Running through the painted crevices,
Each curve, telling its story.
The color leaving its temporary domain, giving itself into
The dark temptation.
Author notes
...a different take on temptation...hope this one lives upto your expectations .
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http://allpoetry.com/contest/2415607
Picture Credit - Dark Lips by: grooveboxx
48 words
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wow short but bloody effective!! lol its amazing i really liked this piece
"And curtains are raised, unleashing the darkness.
The audience stands still, silent, in remorse, witnessing
The death process"
my favourite lines! thanks for entering my contest and good luck!
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Reading this gave me chills! absolutely brilliant. Superb imagery - I absolutely love this:
"The audience stands still, silent, in remorse, witnessing
The death process"
Excellent write! Thanks for sharing this, and all the best in the contest,
Luck.
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thank you , am glad you liked it
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