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Dark Lies

Dark lies drip
from your dark lips
Can nothing from you
ever be true
From the very start
you broke my heart

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Prompt.Dark Lips by grooveboxx

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  • Luckintheshadows
    July 26, 2008

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    short, dark, brilliant! I love the emotion this piece invokes.
    Thanks for sharing, all the best in the contest,

    Luck.