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Dream On

I take myself
by the neck
look into the mirror
to say, I am fine again
Yet my inner soul
feels dead with sorrow
over myself, my life
when you left

Loneliness lingers like
a smog over me daily
not being scared of
what will be next
in this sober world
of nothingness
I grab on to what
is still here

I know that time will come
when all will settle
as I grow older with life
and its mysteries
I let go of you, your heart
is now yours and mine is
now mine...letting go

The world waits for my next
venture, my words scream
for another song
Yet my heart listens to my soul
gathering meanings to send
forth into this world
of emptiness

When I say I am fine with
myself its just me
and my inner self
yelling out
for
HELP!

So I dream on and on
till the dream is no
more...

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  • Unsigned gold member
    August 18, 2008
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    This makes me feel.......me...

    Very well done


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  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    August 14, 2008
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    brave show,,to apeear together when you just want to yell out x


  • Kappa Pyua
    July 29, 2008

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    one can have many different feelings when you've lost someone. weither permanetly or temporarily. It is a daily challenge.