Dark lips call to me
Dark lips lie to me
These lips are not me
These lips are not my friend
Lips that turn away
Lips that cry
Lips that love
Lips that hate
Lips that I love
Lips that I hate
Author notes
Picture Credit - Dark Lips by: grooveboxx
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Quickie by Asylaarix.
300 points, ended July 27, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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WOW!
I mean REALLY WOW!
This is totally unexpected of you, not your usual writing, but then again prompts can do that (lol)
I love this poem, it is really great, different, and creative, not to mention NEW.
Well done and good job,
Keep on writing girl,
Nooni
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ooooh, nice take on the prompt. I like the mixed emotions you have here. Thanks for sharing this, and all the best in the contest,
Luck.
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