Soaring on the wind in a hungry mood
The majestic eagle searches for food
Looking on the ground as he flies past
He spots a tasty morsel for his repast
The eagle has landed
In a list
A contest entry
- The Eagle Flies Quickie by carole21.
475 points, ended July 26, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i like your take you have used on this poem, the rhyme is not forced, you did a great job, congrats on your bronze, and as always keep up the writing, ~Amy
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Excellent!
Enjoyed it. Congrats on your trophy!
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Excellent I loved it
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Awesome write Cathy!! Congrats on the trophy!! I really liked this
~Michaela~
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Congratulations on your trophy as well! I see why it is a winner, it has power and majestic flow and in just a few words it amplifies the strength of the eagle.
Love,
Amera♥
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Congrats on bronze. Your pen is amazing
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An intriguing take on the prompt. Well penned and a wonderful flow. Best wishes in the comp
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cute rendition and good use of rhyme . . thanks for the contest entry
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Excellent
A wonderful take on the prompt. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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