It touched my heart to see,
How beautiful the world really is,
In those pictures.
I could hear those words coming,
Strait from god himself.
I could picture him there,
Talking to me gently.
When I read each word,
It touched my heart to see,
God really say that.
It gave me hope to change,
And sadness to see,
God disappointed in us.
It told the truth,
So greatly.
It said our,
weakness in numbers.
It told me we,
Need to change,
To live gods way.
And we need to change to,
Live our life's,
To the fullest.
Weather man,women,
Boy or girl we live wrong.
We need to live like were,
Dieing tomorrow.
Live in the present,
And not the past nor,
Future.
Live like were children,
And don't rush,
To grow up.
Don't always break yourself,
To make money.
Let people love you,
Don't make them.
Practice forgiveness,
By forgiving yourself,
And Wait for someone You love.
Not everyone sees the world,
In the same way,
And Gods always here for us.
Author notes
For Jeremy0826's Contest-III. The Interview With God
"Live Your Life To The Fullest And Have An Awesome Time!"
I love this quote from you! It really says a lot!
Thanks for this awesome challenge of this contest!
A contest entry
- GROUP CONTEST FOR THE PEOPLE WITH DISABILITES GROUP II by Jeremy0826.
2300 points, ended August 7, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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you should really listen and think about what you wrote here em. Think about how it ties in with your present day problems
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Unconditional love is the best. Yes God gives us unconditional love each new day and he is always with us and gives us hope to go on. Thanks for sharing this amazing write.
Good luck in the contest
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OMG!Did YOU write this???I don't believe it!I am awestruck!(see even over the summer time I can still use big words....Or at least big for me....)ANYWHOS LIKE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!(Some of my awesome rubs of on emily!Conngratz Em!You are now my vice president for awesome!I better watch out....you could take me over!!!!)
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This is very beautiful and filled with
so much truth. I think that this is something
that I would love to read everyday. It would
read beautifully in a frame. A wonderful reminder
of just how unconditional God's love is for all
of us. There is also a lot of great advice that you listed here. Your words are very inspirational and
most of all motivational to the heart and soul!
You did a wonderful job with this one!
However, please go back and check your spelling.
I appreciate your entry and look forward to reading
more from you. Thanks a lot for being an active
member in this group and all the best to you in my
contest! Keep up the wonderful work here!
Jeremy0826
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